Experimental Poetry Form: Rhyming and Indention

Stanza: 1
Lines: 21
Meter: iambic trimeter
Rhyming and indention pattern:
A
A
A
 B
  C
  C
  C
 B
 B
D
D
 E
 E
 E
D
  F
  G
  F
  G
  F
  G

This experimental poetry from is based on two ideas: rhyming and indention.  The rhyming and indention patterns are there to connect ideas internally, set ideas apart and connect ideas together.

The first set is the three A rhymes.  These lines are not indented and form one complete set.  The idea in these lines is self-contained.

The second set are the B and C rhymes.  Each of B rhyming lines is indented one space and each of the C rhyming lines is indented two spaces.  The first B line is indented to set it apart from the A lines.  The C lines are indented to set them apart from the B lines.  The B and C lines form one set.  The first B line starts an idea, the three C lines move from the idea in some way, and the last two B lines come back to the idea.  For example, if the first B line was about a tree, the three C lines might be about birds in the tree, followed by the last two B lines that would focus on the tree again.  The B and C lines are set apart from the A lines, but they all relate to each other.

As a note, all the lines in the form, form one stanza.  The idea, is that while there are sets of ideas, they all connect together.  The one stanza gives the impression of one cohesive idea, rather than detached ideas put together.

Additionally, all the lines have the same short meter.  This is done to let the lines have flow and to have the focus be on the rhyming.  The short lines are meant to increase the noticeability of the rhyming.

The third set are the D and E rhymes.  The lines of these rhymes mirror the B and C rhymes.  In this case, there are two D rhymes, followed by three E rhymes, followed by one D rhyme.  Also, the indention of these lines is one less than with the B and C lines.  This is to help differentiate them.  The idea with the D and E lines is the same as with the B and C rhyming set, except in this case, the idea of the D rhyme gets a longer initial expression and ends with a shorter expression, which is the opposite of the case with the B lines.  The idea is to express an idea, move away from it, and then come back to it briefly.

The last set are the F and G rhymes.  These lines are indented two spaces to set them apart from the previous set.  Also, these lines only have one indention, which is also the case with the starting A lines.  This helps to close the poetry form.  The rhymes of these lines alternates.  This is the only set in the form that has that.  The idea was to change the sound from the previous set.  These lines are also a self-contained set like the previous ones.

As an example of the form, here is a poem about looking at stars at night:

Above the earth at night,
the stars shine with their light,
and seem to glow so bright.
 Beneath the dark night sky,
  out in the cool night air,
  when cold does cause a care,
  and warmth does feel so rare,
 one turns their look up high,
 and does not wonder why.
The thought does then occur,
and seems without a blur,
 of all that is so vast,
 of looking in the past,
 and light that moves so fast,
and thoughts leave where they were.
  When looking to the stars,
  at night when things are cold,
  the thoughts do leave their jars,
  at what does shine like gold,
  like breaking through some bars,
  they leave what once did hold.

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