seeing the dream
This poem is about unfulfilled aspirations. The person in the poem is going about their life, they see the life they want, and they realize that they aren’t living it. They have had the aspiration and have struggled toward it for some time, but have not reached it.
An example might be a person who works for someone else, but dreams of working for themselves. They have tried to move in that direction, but haven’t made any progress. One day they are driving along and they see someone opening a store for the first time. They see it, realize that is what they want and then realize that they aren’t there. There’s a certain sense of defeat in the situation. The person wants to be there, has tried to be there, but isn’t. To see someone else achieve what they want, emphasizes to them that they haven’t achieved it.
The poem is not about envy or jealousy, but rather it is about a person feeling bad about their unfulfilled goals. The poem is inward looking rather than outward.
In terms of form, the poem is three lines with a word count pattern of 2 – 3 – 2, and a syllable count pattern of 4 – 4 – 3.