Poem with an explanation: another week begins

There was something you required,
and that,
that was given.

But you,
you did not keep,
your side of the bargain.

And now,
now you ask for more?

And now,
now you make the same claim?

Somehow,
it doesn’t seem right.

Somehow,
throwing good,
after bad,
just doesn’t seem wise.

But there’s,
there’s the writing.

But there’s,
there’s the voices.

But there’s,
there’s the logic.

Another week begins,
and something is required …

the first step is taken.

 

This poem is about a person who is unsuccessfully trying to lose weight.  In the poem, they are arguing with the weight loss method they chose.

The person has tried a method to lose weight, in this case exercise, but when they weighed themselves, they didn’t lose weight.  Now they question the method, and the overall effort in general.

In the first stanza, the person says that they put in the effort.

In the second stanza, the person criticizes the weight loss method.  In their view, they did something, and so they expected something in return.  Since this did not happen, they feel cheated.

In the third stanza, the person is going to start a new week.  They are contemplating whether they should continue with their efforts.  They wonder this considering that their previous efforts did not work.

In the fourth stanza, the person questions their method.  They wonder how what did not work before is expected to work this time.

In the fifth stanza, the person doesn’t believe trying what they did before will work.

In the sixth stanza, they reiterate this idea.

In the seventh, eighth, and ninth stanzas, they think of evidence supporting them exercising.  They think of things they’ve read, what people have told them, and the logic of exercise.

In the tenth stanza, the week begins, and the person hesitates before exercising.

In the eleventh stanza, the person doesn’t see an alternative, and they exercise again.

The idea of this poem is to look at the path that trying to lose weight can take.  A person can try something, and have it not work, and wonder whether they should keep at it.

Poem with an explanation: How is the sky?

They sky is cloudy,
there in the east,
see the darkness,
the weather is bad.

The sky is clear,
there in the west,
see the light,
the weather is good.

 

This poem is about presenting a point of view.  In the poem, there are two people.  One person says the first stanza and the other person says the second.

In the poem, both people are telling the truth, but they are each giving only one view of it and are therefore distorting the truth.  The first person wants those listening to think the weather is bad.  The second person, wants people to think the weather is good.

The idea in this poem applies to many arguments.  In arguments, people sometimes have a tendency to present a view of the truth that supports their position, while ignoring views that don’t.