Poem with an explanation: narrow minded views

the bears
did chastise the deer
for their narrow minded views


This poem is about differing beliefs.  In the poem there are two groups with different beliefs: bears and deer.  Bears are omnivores and deer are herbivores.  The bears chastise the deer, because the deer don’t eat meat.

The groups represent two groups of society.  One group, represented by bears, engages in some behavior.  The other group, represented by deer, don’t.  The group that engages in the behavior believes there is something wrong with the group that doesn’t.

The poem shows the idea of intolerance, but turned around.  It might be more typical for a group that doesn’t do something to be intolerant of a group that does.  This poem twists the idea and shows the group engaging in the behavior being critical of the group that doesn’t.

In the poem, it might seem that the deer have the more moral behavior.  They don’t eat meat.  Rather than they criticizing the bears for doing so, it is the other way around.  The bears look down on the deer for not doing what they do.

Poem with an explanation: Apples from orange trees

She picked an apple,
from the orange tree,
and fed it to a wolf.

The wolf then went,
to find a deer,
and told it of lake.

The deer then went,
to find the lake,
and drank all of the sand.

And in the sand,
it saw acorns,
that fell from the pine trees.

It planted one,
in the water,
and stood beneath the moon.

And in the dark,
the tree grew orange,
with apples on its stems.

She picked an apple,
from the orange tree,
and fed it to a wolf.


This poem is surreal and a little like a fairy tale.  The general idea of the girl, with the animals that behave like people, is part of the fairy tale.  In each stanza, there is at least one element that is surreal.

In the first stanza, the girl picks an apple, from an orange tree.  This is surreal.  It is also a little play on words, because the tree is colored orange, rather than having oranges on it.  Then, she feeds the apple to a wolf.  This is surreal, because a wolf does not eat apples.

In the second stanza, the wolf goes, and finds a deer.  Rather that eating the deer or even telling it of the apple from the orange tree, it tells it of something that seems completely unrelated, a lake.  This is all surreal.

In the third stanza, the deer goes to lake, but rather than drinking the water from it, it drinks the sand around it.  This is surreal.

In the fourth stanza, the deer finds acorns in the sand.  This is surreal because acorns would normally be in a forest.  Additionally, these acorns, did not fall from oak trees, but instead pine trees.  This is also surreal.

In the fifth stanza, the deer plants an acorn, but not in the sand, but in the water.  This is surreal.  The deer is standing beneath the moon.  Up to this point, readers may have thought the poem was in daytime.  This adds to the fairy tale element of it.

In the sixth stanza, the tree from the acorn grew in the dark (as opposed to the light).  The tree also came out colored orange, with apples on its stems.  This, again, is all surreal.

The last stanza, is like the first, and brings circularity to the poem.  It also shows that what the wolf told the deer was actually related to its experience.