Experimental Poetry Form: line breaks and indentations

This experimental poetry form consists of line breaks and indentations.  The structure looks as follows:

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There are seven lines.  The first line is not indented.  Then there is a line break.  Then there is the second line on the following line.  The second line is indented five spaces.

On the line after the second line, is the third line.  On the line after that is the fourth.  Neither is indented.

On the next line, is the fifth line.  It is indented ten spaces.

After that there is a line break.  On the line after the line break is the sixth line.  It is not indented.

On the line after the sixth line, is the seventh line.  It is indented three spaces.

All of the lines of the poem are, in the structure of writing a document, separate paragraphs, as opposed to lines within a paragraph.

Here is an example poem:

The day was dark with clouds,

 

     and rain seemed near.

Something about the air,
 
just didn’t feel right.

          The car pulled up.

 

There was a sense of movement,

   and it was time to go.

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