on the trees,
a few weeks ago,
they started to change color,
they’re falling off.
know what to do?
algo es no está bien.
en los árbols,
un pocos hace semanas,
ellas comenzaban cambiar de color,
ellas están cayendo por unos árbols.
saben qué hacer?
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Here is a poem to mark this milestone:
You stood by the tree
one thousand one hundred leaves
somewhere there are roots.
This is a photograph of a flower. There are a couple of interesting aspects here. First, the flower’s petals (presumably those are what the pink items are) are separated, they are not close together, as would be seen in something like a rose. Second, the leaves on the plant are a mixture of red and green. This is different from plants that generally have green leaves.
This photograph can inspire poetry from its interesting aspects. Some ideas include:
- A Christmas poem, as inspired by the red and green leaves
- A poem about being different, as inspired by either the leaves or the petals
- A poem about things that are separated, but not necessarily in a negative sense, as inspired by the petals
The finches flew about the sky,
as fallen leaves blew in the breeze,
their wings did flap as they flew high,
the finches flew about the sky.
As up above the flock went by,
the leaves blew on with simple ease,
the finches flew about the sky,
as fallen leaves blew in the breeze.
The above poem is a triolet. The idea of the poem is the relation of two images: finches flying and leaves blowing. The A rhyme lines (lines 1, 3, 4, 5, and 7) are about the finches flying, and the B rhyme lines (lines 2, 6, and 8) are about the leaves blowing. The images are a similar: a group of birds moving and a group of leaves moving, but they also contrast: the birds are active (they are flying) and the leaves are passive (they are being blown).
Outside beneath canopy leaves,
resting in shade hidden from sun,
little soft eyes watch as squirrels run,
as a small bird quietly weaves,
thinking of what working achieves,
butterflies land softly for fun,
and underneath quietly done,
slowly eyes close under leaf eaves.
(4/40) Experimental Poetry Form: Symmetry
This is a photograph of a bud, assuming that is the appropriate term, of leaves, that is in the process of opening up. It is on the end of a stem on an evergreen bush.
This photograph can inspire poetry in at least a few different ways. One inspiration can come from the idea that the leaves are in the middle of a process. A poet could be inspired to write a poem about some other process that might be at a middle stage. For example, a poet could write about someone running a marathon. Rather than focusing on the beginning of the race or the end, a poet could write a poem about what the race is like half way through.
Another inspiration could come from the idea that the leaves are already, and will to a greater extent once they open, contribute to the plant. The leaves will contribute to the plant through photosynthesis. The idea of contribution, inspired by this photograph, might inspire a poet to write about related things. For example, a poet could write about employees at a factory contributing to what the factory produces.
In another inspiration, a poet might see the photograph and decide to focus on a more subtle point. Rather than focusing on the leaves that are opening, a poet might focus on the thin strand of spider’s web that is seen in the photograph. A poet might see the thin strand, think about how it is affected by the leaves, and think about the strand being fragile. This could inspire a poet to write a poem about something fragile.
did steep too long,
in the water