It seems like more.
It seems like less.
You are missed.
It seems like more.
It seems like less.
You are missed.
checking the time again
waiting two more minutes
and then a call
there’s probably a reason
In this poem, a person thinks they may have been stood up for a date.
The person in the poem is standing outside the place where the date is to take place (standing outside). Their date is late and they have checked the time multiple times while they have waited (checking the time again). They set a threshold time to wait for before calling to see why their date isn’t there. That time is two minutes away (waiting two more minutes). They want to believe their date is not there for a reason other than they have been stood up (there’s probably a reason).
P. S. This blog post is the one thousand five hundred and sixty second blog post on the blog. As was noted in the post for the six year anniversary for the blog, the blog will be ending soon.
A decision has been made that the last new blog post on the blog will be number one thousand six hundred. That means that there are thirty eight new blog posts to post. Although it may change, the last new blog post should be posted on August 20, 2020. Thank you to everyone who has read something on the blog.
when the sun shines
don’t forget the rain
say something new
if you read
with new eyes.
hablan algo nuevo
con ojos nuevo.
when darkness grows
and shadows fall
the time is short
and hearts beat quick
as hours wane
reading a story
how many pages are left?
the tree loses leaves
Today’s poetry topic idea is time. There are a number of ways a poet could write about time. Some of them include writing about:
Here is an example poem about time:
sitting in the room
feeling every tick
when will the door open
You have time
but it will go
do something with it.
Ustedes tienen tiempo
pero lo irá
hacen algo con lo.
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Here’s a poem:
what took you so long?
like five years
(and 1 month, 3 weeks, and 4 days),
for you to get here.
you should learn to be more punctual.
As an exercise you may have written a poem in a predetermined limited amount of time. Maybe something like 5 or 10 minutes. This might have been something that you did on your own, as a group, or as part of a writing exercise.
There are a number of benefits to writing a poem in a predetermined limited amount of time. They include:
Under the restrictive time conditions a poet can sometimes come up with new ideas. Since something has to be thought of quickly, a poet might think of something that they would not have otherwise.
Showing the value of un-refinement:
When a poem is written in this way, a poet may not get a chance to go over it multiple times. A poet may not get a chance to change word choice, rewrite lines, or experiment with form.
While this may seem like a negative, a poet might be surprised at the quality of their work without these things. They might find that readers respond well to something that, at least in the poet’s eyes, is unpolished. They might find that readers can’t perceive the refinement of the poem.
If this happens, it can be good for a poet. It can teach them that their work can be good even if it isn’t as good as they think it could be.
Showing that poems written in less time can still be quality poems:
Like the idea above, a poet might learn through these exercise that they don’t need to spend as much time as they thought to write a poem that they and or others think is good. They might find that they like, and others receive well, a poem that was written in five minutes as much as or more than one that took an hour. This can be a good lesson if it occurs.
Developing a sense of speed in writing poetry:
These types of exercises can be helpful in teaching a poet to write more quickly. While this may seem like the same benefit as above, the idea is different. In this case, a poet can train themselves to develop and write poetry more quickly. This can be good for a poet and might come up in a variety of situations. For example, imagine a poet was writing to someone via instant messaging. Maybe the poet had a great or humorous point to get across and thought that it would be best conveyed through a poem (this could be similar to responding to someone with a famous quote). In this case a poet would have to be quick for the effect to be there. Practicing writing quickly can help a poet to develop this skill.
Although these exercises have their benefits, they do lack in some areas. Some of them include:
A comparison to real life situations:
Although, as mentioned above, there are situations when a poet would want to write quickly, this might not usually be the case. In general circumstances a poet could spend as much time as they want on a poem. While these exercises might be useful generally speaking, they might not be useful for everyday writing situations.
The potential to build bad habits:
Although there can be benefits to writing poetry quickly and without refinement, if a poet does this too much they might develop it as a writing style. Although, again, there is value in such writing, a poet might more generally speaking be better served taking their time with their writing. If a poet did these types of exercises too much, the style could become habit for them.
The potential to spend too much time:
Although these exercises are intended to be brief, if a poet did too many of them it could use up a lot of time. For example, if a poet did 12, 5-minute exercises, they would spend an hour. This might not be something a poet considers when they start exercises like this.
Writing poems in a predetermined limited amount of time can have benefits for a poet. As long as a poet limits the exercises and does other styles of writing, they can learn for the experience.