Poem: dinner time

Cannot have dinner,
until this post is finished.
What to write about?


Poetry essay: Improving your poetry

As you write poetry, at some point you might look to improve your work.  Maybe you feel your poems could have more impact.  Maybe your poetry isn’t getting the response you want.  Maybe you feel like you’re not getting your message across.

As you look to improve the poetry you write, there are some things you can do.  Here are a few:

Read more poetry

One way to get better at writing poetry is to read more poetry.  The more poetry you read, the more ideas, forms, techniques, and so forth you will encounter.  As you read, you can pick up on things and improve your own work.

Analyze poems

As you read poetry, you might take some time to analyze what you are reading.  Think about why you like a poem or don’t.  Think about what makes a poem effective or not.  If you take notes, and read enough poems from different poets, you might start to see trends.  You could find that you think certain attributes make poems good and others don’t.  At some point you could even make a list of the qualities of a good poem.

Analyze your own poetry

As you spend time analyzing the poems of others, you should also spend time analyzing your own work.  Look back over poems you wrote and think about them.  Think about their effectiveness and impact.  As you do, you could discover trends in your own work.  You could find things that you think work and others that you think don’t.

Write more poems

Although your goal is quality, one way to move toward it is with quantity.  The more poems you write, the more chances you have to use ideas, forms, metaphors, symbols, literary devices, and so forth.  The more you practice, the better you will get.


As you write more poems you might try to experiment.  Write about ideas you haven’t before.  Use forms you don’t normally use.  Try different techniques.  As you do, you can pick up on things that work for you and things that don’t.  You can use what you learn to improve your work.

Study poetry

In addition to reading, writing, and thinking about poetry, you might also try studying poetry.  There are books on poetics that you can read.  You can learn about poetry techniques, poetry over time, poetry in relation to other things, and other ideas.  By studying poetry you can learn things that can help with your writing of it.


One way to improve the poetry you write is through research.  The more you understand about the something, all else being equal, the better you can write about it.  Depending on what you are writing about, go places, find people who are experiencing the thing, experience the thing yourself, or read books about the thing.  You might find that by doing so, you pick up on ideas and details that you never thought of.

Get feedback

Find people to critique your poetry.  This might be through comments on a blog, at writing groups, with friends, and in other situations.  See how others perceive what you write.  Find out what made sense to them and what didn’t.  Find out what ideas they picked up on and which they missed.  You can use what you find out to improve your work.

Poetry essay: Some benefits to writing poetry

If you like reading poetry but don’t write it as much as you’d like, here are some benefits to writing poetry that will hopefully inspire you to write more.  If you already write a lot of poetry, the list below will let you in on some of the benefits you are gaining.


Poetry is good for expression.  This might be what people think about when they think about a benefit of writing poetry.  Poetry is a way for a person to express themselves.

Poetry can be a different form of expression from other kinds of writing or talking because of its style.

With poetry, a person doesn’t have to be direct.  They can use symbolism and metaphor to express something they are feeling, without revealing too much of themselves.

Also, with poetry, a person can lead in to something.  They can gradually build to an idea and present it in the way they want.  This could be different than other styles of writing where a lead in might take away from the main idea.

Poetry can also be good for expression because it doesn’t have to tell a whole story.  Poetry can just focus on a scene.  Poetry can just be the middle, without having a beginning or an end.  This can be good if a person wants to express a moment in time without describing what happened before and after it.

Improved writing

Writing poetry can help a person write better.  You can learn new words and word combinations.  You might discover different metaphors and analogies for things.  You might learn more about syllables, rhyme, and the way words sound.  Poetry can be a good exercise for writing in general.

A vehicle for learning

Poetry can help a person learn about other things.  Think, for example, if you were going to write poetry about something you cared about, but didn’t have too much knowledge of.  It might be a disease, a current event, a social issue, or something else.  To write poetry about the subject, you might start by doing some research.  You might read about the subject, watch programs about it, or talk to people.  In doing so, you would learn ideas and terminology that you could use in your poetry.  In addition, you would also be learning about the subject more generally.  You would be getting better informed.  This information could have a number of benefits for you.  For example, if you learned about a disease, you might become more empathetic to those who have it.


Poetry can be a tool for interaction.  On one level, it could be one way interaction.  You could write poetry simply for others to read.  If you take it a step further, you could have two way interactions.

You might have a poetry blog.  You could post poetry for others to read, read poetry from others, and have conversations via comments.

You might go to poetry events.  It could be a reading or something with an author.  You could interact with others there.

You might join a poetry group.  You could share the poetry you wrote and listen to others.  You could have discussions about different poems.

A break

Poetry can be a way to take a break.  It can be a way to take your mind off of whatever it is on and focus on something else.  A break might help a person feel more relaxed and when they go back to what they were doing, they might be able to focus on it more.  Sometimes, when a person stops focusing on something, and pays attention to something else, they can come up with ideas for the first thing.

A start for short fiction writing

If you read the sets that are on MSakran.com, you might notice that some of the poems and short stories are connected in a direct way (in each set they are connected in some way).  Some of the short stories are longer versions of the poems that are with them.

A poem can be a way to start a short story.  As mentioned above, a poem can be way to express a scene.  It can be a way to show a moment in time.  It can be the middle, without the beginning or end.

Sometimes when a person writes fiction, the middle is what they think of first.  They know the heart of the story.  They know the main point and impact.  This part can be what they express in poetry.

Once that part is expressed, a person could fill it out more.  They could take the poem they wrote and write it in longer language.  They could turn the poem into the middle of a story.

Once the middle of the story is developed, the person can then focus on the beginning and the end.  They’ve developed the main part, and then they can focus on what is around it.

Poetry used this way can be a start for more developed stories.

Poetry essay: Imparting emotion to poetry

In writing poetry, there may be times when a poet wants to impart emotion to their words.

It could be, that the topic they are writing about is personal to themselves.  Maybe they or someone they are close to has experienced something that they are trying to express.  This topic might be one the poet feels connected to and strongly about and they want to express that emotion in their writing.

Alternatively, a poet could be writing about something that they don’t have a connection to.  A poet, for example, might be writing about a social issue.  They may have no direct connection to the topic themselves, but they still want to impart emotion for the reader.

As another alternative, a poet may be writing a fictional poem or one with fictional elements.  In the poem, a character might be experiencing an emotion.  This might have nothing to do with the poet personally and may not be connected to a societal issue.  It might just be an emotion the character is experiencing in their own circumstances.  As the poet writes, they might work to have this emotion come through for the reader.

There are a number of ways that a poet can have emotion come through in their writing.


One way a poet can increase the emotion of their writing is to include details.  When a poet includes details regarding a situation, it can add authenticity and help relay the experience.

For example, if a poet was writing about cancer treatment, they could increase the emotion of the poem if they wrote about things like a chemotherapy pump or having a chest port.  Having these details, and expressing what they are like, can add inherit emotion to a poem.

Play acting

If a poet is writing a poem that could be read as dialogue, one way to increase the emotion is to play act the part.  For example, if a poet were writing what it was like for someone to explain how their spouse died, and how they are a widow or widower, they might try to act it out.  They might try to actually say the part and act as if they were explaining to someone how their spouse died.  They could try to feel the emotion of their words and say them in a realistic way.  They could then write what they said.  This would help impart emotion to their writing.

Actually feeling the emotion

If a poet is actually experiencing an emotion, this can help them when writing about it.  If a poet is actually feeling joy, for example, then this can help them express joy in their writing.  They can write what joyfulness is like, because they are joyful.

Fewer words and setting apart impact lines

One way to have more emotion in a poem is to have fewer words and to have lines of impact set apart.  Sometimes brief is best when describing an emotion.  Sometimes the less that is written, the better.  In these instances, if the emotional impact is set apart, this can increase the emotion by having a pause and by letting the emotional aspect stand alone.

Careful word choice and order

In line with the idea of fewer words and using impact lines, a poet should also focus on careful word choice and the order of their words when they are trying to impart emotion.  Because of the experiential nature of emotions, the exact words used and the order of them can have an effect on the experience.  Think of experiences that are contained moments.  An example might be a man proposing to a woman, or a man and a woman telling one of their sets of parents that they are having a baby.  Because of the significance of these moments and the fact that they happen at a specific time and place, the way the words are said can be very important.  In a sense, there is only one chance to have the moment.  This can make word choice and order very important.  The same idea, in a sense, applies to emotional poetry.

Overt metaphor and symbolism

Another way to impart emotion through poetry is through the use of metaphor and symbolism.  Rather than having obscure ideas, to impart emotions the uses should be overt.  A reader should be able to understand what the metaphor is referring to and what the symbolism represents.  The idea is for the reader to realize they are reading metaphor and symbolism and to have that realization impart increased effect to the emotion imparted.

An example might be a poem where someone dies as a flower loses its petals.  The waning of the person’s life is overtly represented by the flower losing its petals.  This helps the idea of the flower to impart increased emotion to the idea of the person’s death.

Poetry essay: How much time should be spent writing a poem?

A question that can come up for a poet is, “How much time should be spent writing a poem?”

You may have heard poets say that they spent months on a poem.  You may have heard some say that they wrote something in five minutes.  You may have heard everything in between.

As a writer, you may have had experience with this yourself.  Maybe you write some poems that take a few minutes each and you write other poems that still don’t feel right after thinking about them for hours.

A question that may come up then is, how long should you be spending writing a single poem?

Unfortunately, like most questions, there isn’t one answer.  It’s not like someone could tell you that you should spend 15 minutes.  It depends on the situation.

In some cases, you may want to spend very little time on a poem.

For example, there is the idea, that if something isn’t flowing, that you should stop and change to something else.  If you are writing a poem, and twenty minutes later, it still isn’t working, you might think about stopping it and writing something else.

As another example, you might be submitting poems to magazines.  Given the reality of the situation, you may have to write and send a lot of poems to get a few published.  Because of this, efficiency might be of value.  If you find that you have to write and submit 100 poems to get 10 published, you might find that you can’t spend too much time on those 100 poems.

As another example, maybe you write many poems that are about light or impersonal subjects.  You might find that they are fine written in a just a few minutes each.  You might not see too much value in spending too much time on them.

As you think about how much time to spend on a poem, it is important to remember that quality and time spent aren’t always directly related.  Something that took two hours to write isn’t necessarily going to be better than something that took two minutes to write.

In other cases, you might want to spend more time on a poem.

Somethings a poet writes about are very personal.  If something is extremely important, you might want to spend more time on it to make sure it is right and says what you want to say.

In another example, imagine something you write is going to be public, very lasting or in some sense singular.  Imagine you are getting to have a poem posted in a public space and it will be there for a long time.  Or imagine you get to have just one poem in an anthology.  In these cases, you might want to spend more time on what you write.  It might not mean you spend all that time writing one poem.  You may write many or you may spend a lot of time thinking about or revisiting a poem.  Given the weight of what you are doing though, you might feel it is important to give what you are doing the proper time.

When deciding how much time to spend on a poem you should take different things into account and make a decision that fits the situation.  Sometimes you’ll decide that five minutes is enough, other times you feel that five hours isn’t.  It all depends on the situation.

Interview with: Peeking Cat Poetry Magazine

M. Sakran recently had an interview with Peeking Cat Poetry Magazine. You may remember Peeking Cat Poetry Magazine, as M. Sakran had a poem published with them in March of 2016. There was a post on this blog about it at the time, and you can read it here: Poem published in Peeking Cat Poetry Magazine.

The interview was about M. Sakran’s writing.  It is part of series of interviews with writers.  You can read the interview here: M. Sakran interview with Peeking Cat Poetry Magazine.

Parts of the interview focus on poetry and in it you can learn more about M. Sakran and M. Sakran’s writing.

It was an honor to be able to participate in the interview.

Poetry topic idea: fiction

The poetry topic idea for today’s post is fiction.

Using this idea, a poet could write a poem about something fictional.  While many poems may be about actual events in a poet’s life, a poet could write a poem about something fictional to illustrate an idea.

For example, a poet may never have been to another country, but may like the idea of expressing the feelings that may come the first time a person does so.  A poet could write a fictional poem about that topic to express those ideas.

Additionally, rather than writing a fictional poem, a poet might choose to write a poem about fiction.  Fiction has many aspects – story, plot, characters, relation to reality, imagination, etc. – and a poet could write about these elements in a poem.

Here is an example that uses both ideas – it is a fictional poem about fiction:

In the afternoon,
she sat at the table,
writing a story,
about the woman,
who lost her cat.

In the morning,
she sat at the table,
writing poster signs,
about her dog,
that was missing.

A poem with an explanation: a letter

A handwritten letter
with a struggle for expression
and a sense of importance
written with white lead
on white paper.


The first aspect of this poem is the title: “a letter”.  “a” was chosen rather than “the” to have a sense of indefiniteness.  This letter is seemingly one of a group and does not at first stand out.  Both “a” and “letter” were not capitalized to express a sense of subtlety and meekness.  Both of these imply that in some sense, the letter is not meant to stand out

The first line mentions that the letter is handwritten.  This is to evoke an image that has some sense of past: the letter is not typed on a computer.  Second, it is meant to suggest to the reader the image of someone sitting at desk writing in long hand.  Thirdly, even though the image created may be one of someone writing a letter, the line indicates that the letter has already been written.  The letter is already finished.

The second and third lines go together to create a mood.  The letter writer had trouble finding words to get across the importance of what they were writing.  The words “struggle” and “sense” are meant to impart a sense of emotion.  It is as if the letter writer was feeling somewhat overwhelmed as they wrote.  Another point is that knowing the tone of the letter implies that the letter has been read, however, it does not indicate who has read it, a separate reader, or the letter writer.  It is unclear whether the poem is describing the thoughts of the letter writer, or the impression of the letter reader.

The fourth and fifth lines go together and have literal and metaphorical implications.  In a literal sense the letter writer wrote something that a reader would not be able to read: white text on white paper.  Secondly, the letter writer used a pencil to write as indicated by the word “lead”.  This adds to the difficulty that a reader would have in reading the letter because pencil lead would be lighter than ink and would fade.  In a metaphorical sense, a letter written with white lead on white paper is meant to imply that the letter writer was hesitant to communicate: they wanted to express something, but they were afraid of what the receipt of the expression would imply.  Secondly, “lead” is meant to imply heaviness as the word “lead” in “pencil lead” is pronounced the same as the metal “lead”.  This idea relates to the struggle for expression that the writer was having.

The image in this poem is of an emotion where there is difficulty and hesitancy to communicate it.  It meant to illustrate this broader idea.